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Some Things Will Never Change. by *Amberfang:iconAmberfang:



Little blue drops of pure disaster,
Streaming down her face, faster and faster,
Made of silk or made of plaster,
Some things will never change.

The girl in the mirror isn't the kid she once knew,
How could someone be so blue?
She bit off more than she could chew,
Some things will never change.

Where and Why did she go?
She disapeared so suddenly and so,
It's something we might never know,
Some things will never change.
©2009 *Amberfang
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Author's Comments

uhm, yah.
do you know how hard it is to find something that rhymes with disaster? holy shittt, it took hours!

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:iconotseis-ragnarok:
I like this rhyme scheme.
And if you hadn't said so, I never would've know you had difficulties with this piece. The flow is just so perfect... Nicely done.

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:icontoaakatsuki:
"Little blue drops of pure disaster,"

Very good opening. Certainly caught my eye. :]

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:iconhillsofmyst:
i didn't know tears were blue D:
THIS IS AWESOME! i actually love it. and the rhymes. are like. amazing. doodz.

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:iconhillsofmyst:
'tis mah pleazoore:D

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:iconshadowkaru15:
ooh, you did a nice job with the rhyme =D
i will fav this because it is so nice xD

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